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Tony
11-03-2005, 09:45 PM
In a Cuban Mansion

In a Cuban former mansion
That looked like a fort
I was imprisoned
For a time… very short

Close to forty from the whole world
Resided there in five large rooms
All male, all races, all ages
From nineteen to sixty two

They suffer,
they cried,
They long for their loved ones from afar
In their pain,
in their shame,
in their pride
Victims of a bureaucracy,
that is senseless

Loss of liberty,
Loss of money,
Loss of time,
And no crime
Results of thoughtless rules
Never geared to solve
Your problem , but mine
OH GOD!!! What an agony!!!
The hurt is still there,
Not gone.

Not in my life, I thought
To do wrong, or be caught
For the right in doing
Or the crime not wanting
No punishment, they said
Just correction
So there is no repetition
Of the error not mine in writing

India, Bangladesh, Pakistan
Sri Lanka and Nepal
Nigeria, Ghana, French Guinea
Angola and Ethiopia
Yemen, Jordan, Italy
Peru, Canada and Cuba
Four continents in one place
And more than ten languages

The beauty of people,
Their dreams, their goals,
Their business, their studies
All shattered, all in shambles
Their sickness, their depression,
Their tears, their humiliation
The abuse, the oppression.

Is there a way?
Is there a solution?
Is there Justice?
Is there compassion?
Were rules made for humans,
Or humans for rules?

Rules without heart,
Rules without sense,
Rules without logic,
Rules , Rules , Rules
Rules imposed for order
Creating only disorder

God help those left behind
They need support
They have no one
To help them behind
They are in that mansion
Made a house of detention
Made of a “nice” old fort.

Tony Fernandez, May 13th 2000, 42 years after


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In A Cuban Mansion
In a Cuban mansion that looks like a fort
I was imprisoned For a time... very short
Close to forty, from the whole world
Resided there, in five large rooms
All male, all races, all ages
They suffer cried longing for loved ones
In their pain and shame in their pride
Victims of a senseless bureaucracy
Lost liberty,lost money,lost time, no crime
Results of thoughtless rules
Never geared to solve your problem
OH God!!!!What an agony!!!
The hurt is still there, not gone.
Not in my life, I thought
To do wrong, or be caught
For the right in doing
Or the crime not wanting
No punishment, they said...Just correction
So there is no repetition
Of the error not mine in writing
O A Fernandez

Escrito en una carcel en Cuba

Vampiro
11-03-2005, 09:52 PM
oye deberias ponerlo en español por los que no tiene traductor

Tony
11-03-2005, 10:01 PM
Es interesante que sabiendo español y habiendo escrito otros poemas de español ese todo salio en ingles en Cuba mi pais de origen si se traduce pierde mucho en su valor literario

Ademas como traductor oficial de ambas lenguas se que perderia muchosi se traduce

Vampiro
11-03-2005, 10:06 PM
veo que si tienes Razon

Tony
01-01-2008, 07:37 PM
sin embargo si alguien quiere tratar de traducirlo le ayudo